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Wednesday, November 06, 2002 ( 10:22 PM ) hillary Yay, I have almost caught up. I should be at 10,000 today, but I'm only at 9,410. Still, that's only 600 words behind, whereas I was 5,000 words behind yesterday! The writing is getting worse, but I'm also getting closer to the parts that I actually want to write (i.e. adulthood). It's going to be a LOT of fun to revise, add things, move them around, rewrite...especially when the word count will no longer be critical. I'm having the hardest time weaving relevent plot points into the childhood scenes, and also hard to introduce other character's personlities without seeming obvious. It's mostly just character development, and semi-pointless at that because it's from the POV of a child. Probably will be scrapped in successive drafts, but it's interesting to learn so much about her, like the fact that she's obsessed with dead animals and that she founded a birdwatching club (!?). Josh sent me a really encouraging email out of the blue, which was unexpected and awesome. Sometimes I forget what it was like having such an amazing group of friends in college. # Monday, November 04, 2002 ( 10:29 AM ) hillary I didn't write at all on day 2 or day 3. Writing at home doesn't seem to work for me. I've thought of a whole new format for the novel, which I think will make writing easier (also easier to skip ahead and/or go back and expand chapters). Basically chronological, with chapters numbered by age, i.e. Chapter 8 = age 8, and so on. Starts with Chapter 8, cycles through chapter 25, then starts over at Chapter 0 with Mona's life. I'm really frustrated and afraid that I won't be able to finish. I will be thoroughly disgusted with myself if I give up, but I'm also not sure I need the additional stress in my life. # Friday, November 01, 2002 ( 8:22 PM ) hillary 2,003 words. Like pulling as many fucking teeth. # ( 3:46 PM ) hillary I think I might switch back and forth between first-person Hosanna and first-person Mima, with her in-and-out Alzheimer's thoughts. That would be an easier way to tell Chia's story that just through letters or dialogue. # Tuesday, October 29, 2002 ( 6:44 PM ) hillary Sanna is a 2nd grade teacher. Still goes to church regularly. Mima has hair like Randi. Monday, October 28, 2002 ( 8:18 PM ) hillary jargony bits: Impacts of Introduced Avian Diseases on the Fig. 1. Anianiau (Hemignathus parvus) from the Alakai Wilderness Preserve, Kauai. This species is currently restricted to high elevation montane rain forests on Kauai. Like other native honeycreepers, Anianiau are highly susceptible to avian pox and malaria and have disappeared from former low elevation habitats because of mosquito transmitted avian diseases. Fig. 2. Foot lesions caused by avian pox virus. The large swellings caused by the virus make it difficult for birds to perch and forage. Vision may be impaired when lesions occur around the eyes and beak. ancestor: one colonizing species of finch, possibly a Eurasian rosefinch (Carpodacus sp.) or, less likely, the North American house finch (Carpodacus mexicanus) Nectar-feeding honeycreepers evolved dramatically curved bills designed for probing and extracting the nectar from the flowers of Hawaii's endemic lobelias and other plants. Insectivorous honeycreepers developed thin, warbler-like bills for picking insects from the foliage. Seed-eaters developed stouter, stronger bills for cracking tough husks. Some species probed or cracked bark with strong hooked bills seeking wood-boring insects, thereby filling a niche woodpeckers do elsewhere. The 'I'iwi is one of the many species of honeycreepers that Their movements are also unique as they spend much of Abstract: The Hawaiian honeycreepers are a dramatic example of adaptive radiation but contrast with the four other songbird lineages that successfully colonized the Hawaiian archipelago and failed to undergo similar diversification. To explore the processes that produced the diversity dichotomy in this insular fauna, we compared clade age and morphologic diversity between the speciose honeycreepers and the comparatively depauperate Hawaiian thrushes. Mitochondrial-DNA-based genetic distances between these Hawaiian clades and their continental sister taxa indicate that the ancestral thrush colonized the Hawaiian Islands as early as the common ancestor of the honeycreepers. This similar timing of colonization indicates that the marked difference in diversity between the Hawaiian honeycreeper and thrush clades is unlikely to result from differences in these clades' tenures within the archipelago. If time cannot explain the contrasting diversities of these taxa, then an intrinsic, clade-specific trait may have fostered the honeycreeper radiation. Because the honeycreepers have diversified most dramatically in morphological characters related to resource utilization, we used principal components analyses of bill characters to compare the magnitudes of morphological variation in the ancestral clades from which the Hawaiian honeycreeper and thrush lineages are derived, the Carduelini and Turdinae respectively. Although the Carduelini share a more recent common ancestor and have a lower species diversity than the Turdinae, these finch-like relatives of the honeycreepers exhibit significantly greater variation in bill morphology than do the continental relatives of the Hawaiian thrushes. The higher magnitude of morphological variation in the non-Hawaiian Carduelini suggests that the honeycreepers fall within a clade exhibiting a generally high evolutionary flexibility in bill morphology. Accordingly, although the magnitude of bill variation among the honeycreepers is similar to that of the entire passerine radiation, this dramatic morphological radiation represents but an extreme manifestation of a general clade-specific ability to evolve novel morphologies. (http://www.eeb.cornell.edu/lovette/pdf/Myadestes.pdf) ( 8:13 PM ) hillary "Allopatric speciation" "The Hawaiian honeycreepers form an endemic family." I love the idea of an endemic family, one that is rooted in place and just peters out if it is transplanted (peters, ha ha). Telespiza cantans Laysan Finch Hawaiian Honeycreepers (Drepanidae) ( 8:04 PM ) hillary I'll be damned if Honeycreepers aren't finches!! How's that for coincidence? Honeycreeper isn't a bad name for a novel, you know. I already have a title, but I just may change it. Hawaiian Honeycreepers - Family Drepanididae 'I'IWI - Vestiaria coccinea ------------------ The DNA shows that the original honeycreeper rapidly evolved into a large number of species, the descendants of which are still with us today. In some cases, the DNA also documents when a species colonized new Hawaiian islands as they emerged from the sea. Getting back to the `auku`u and the `io, DNA and the molecular clock would say that the heron reached Hawaii in the last few thousand years, and that the hawk arrived about a million years ago. some pictures ( 8:00 PM ) hillary No finches in Malaysia says Judy. Not true, but we will take it as truth, that there are no notable finches in Malaysia. How about Hawaiian Honeycreepers as the object of Pete's affection? The Hawaiian Honeycreepers The Hawaiian Honeycreepers are typified by nectar feeding, their bright colouration and canary-like songs. They are considered one of the finest examples of adaptive radiation, even more diverse than Darwin's Galapagos finches, as a wide array of different species has evolved in all the different niches provided by the Hawaiian archipelago. The book will therefore be of interest to evolutionary biologists and ecologists as well as professional ornithologists and amateur bird watchers. As with the other books in the Bird Family of the World series, the work is divided into two main sections. Part one is an overview of the Hawaiian Honeycreeper evolution and natural history and Part two comprises accounts of each species. The author has produced his own outstanding illustrations of these birds to accompany his text. ( 11:03 AM ) hillary The squirrel story re: Jack # Thursday, October 24, 2002 ( 4:56 PM ) hillary Freaking out. Yes indeed. Completely freakinglyfreakoutish. # ( 4:41 PM ) hillary A few things: 1. Cyril is a ghost! Who knew. 2. The Mythology of Our Birth? I'm still stuck on this. 3. Chia's maiden name was Weltsfisch. Tuesday, October 22, 2002 ( 8:08 AM ) hillary So I have roped one at least one friend into participating, for commiseration purposes (aden_nak, one of my best friends from college--he has already written a novel). I am pretty much petrified of this experience, as I am not used to finishing things. Even my poems are always half-written. I'm a starter! I am great at starting! I will take an idea and run with it! About a block. And then I drop it and start something new. So my challenge to myself is not to write a great novel, but to actually finish the project. Also to write a great novel. We'll see how that works out. I have some characters jangling around in my head.
So is this The Mythology of My Birth or The Mythology of Your Birth? Does it matter if it is about Mona's birth or Sanna's birth? Both are under unusual circumstances. Or is it a mythology because it never happened (in the case of Mona)? My instinct is to make this a first person narrative, interspersed with letters from Pete to Sanna, and letters that Sanna finds from her mother to Mima. I am scared to synopsize the plot for fear of making it something dull, so I won't. # |
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